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Warrior Cats Thistlestorm by JuJuKat Warrior Cats Thistlestorm by JuJuKat
Name: Thistlestorm
Gender: Tom
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Snow
Appearance: White tom with black spots and amber eyes
History: *normal clan life*
Personality: A sweet loving tom who likes to hang with friends,work for his clan and just have fun!
-Family- Dead
-Parents- Dead
-Siblings- none
-Mate- None yet (looking)
-Kits- None yet

Relation Ships

:bulletblack: acquaintances
:bulletgreen: Buddies
:bulletgreen::bulletgreen: Friend
:bulletblue: Good friend
:bulletblue::bulletblue: Best Friends
:bulletyellow: Attraction
:bulletyellow::bulletyellow: Crush
:bulletpink: More than a crush
:bulletpink::bulletpink: Love
:bulletpurple: Family
:bulletred: Dislike
:bulletred::bulletred: Hate serious problem with
:bulletorange: lust
:bulletwhite: Mixed feelings

:bulletyellow::bulletyellow:/:bulletgreen:
Thunder-
S-She is an...amazing,beautiful cat.I met her walking around.W-W both get red around each other...I-i just feel....
:bulletpink:-Its now official.I like this cat A LOT!She feels the same way,I know.I just hope.....we can be...more?
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again i do critique thing ok what programe do you use anyway uh i cant see moth very well and the back legs are strate like the front ones i cant sea the neek at all the eys are 2 big his tale is 2 big and i cant see thr toes on his paws and the writen ones should be tyep like the others and the line should be betewn the writen leeters and the tyep ones his cest should be biger and his arms shold go on to his body a bit and ther shold be have a cricle by the arms to show the sholder so ya hopped it hellped
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Critique by Kykyru Nov 30, 2012, 9:13:01 PM
Now lets start..
First off- I will not lie, but you have a lot of work still, lets look at the face, the pupils are off, and the muzzle... Where is the muzzle? Is it under all the black? You also abused the blur tool a lot (most on the face) So that makes the impact go down-- I can't even see the face! :c The legs are short and stubby, maybe look at a photo of a cat next time? The back legs are off- one is flat and one is great. The tail is really fat at the top, you must not do that, :c now then, I don't want to put you down, so here's the great parts.
I like the tuffs of fur, and the ears are quite nice, but don't worry, you'll get much better!
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Nyanamo Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'Im sorry. I have no idea where to START critiquing this. The anatomy is atrocious, even if it is a cartoon. The colors contrast GREATLY. I can't even make out the mouth of the character. The spots are disorienting, it's all just so horribly done. Try looking up the breed of cat you are trying to make (which to me looks like an Egyptian Mau). That's all I can tell you.
Next time you do artwork for this character, at least try. *-*
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Rexart35 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
be respectful fool
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Nyanamo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Meow to you too :3
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JuJuKat Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am saying the same thing about this one!!!! i promise i have changed my style
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i really do hate this picture and i am planning ti redo it when i have the time
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RetroChocobo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Digital Artist
I was also wondering about this whole clan rp stuff. I have recently read 5 of the books, the first oens to exist, and want to make an OC to roleplay with...

Is there a group? A certain test to choose your clan? And can you make your own clans like how you used snowclan?

Sorry, I'm a clueless bastard cx
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JuJuKat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol

Anyclan BUT SNOWCLAN they are over flowing with cats

nope only use Rainclan Stoneclan or Leafclan

Snowclan would be on the list but they have a lot of cats
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RetroChocobo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Digital Artist
Why so many? e-e
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JuJuKat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
insnowclan..i have no idea XD
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RetroChocobo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Digital Artist
I'm doing the ref nooow!!

//SQUEEEE

I'm joining rainclan just so you know ouo
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JuJuKat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I saw it I have Lilyfur and Bumbleleap, my friend wanted me to make Bumbleleap

~XxAyakoxX did lol
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